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- | Most of the text in this introductory section, especially in the section "The Fearless Physics of The Renaissance", is too abstract and philosophical to be appropriate in a book of this sort.
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- | --[[User:AdamDingle|AdamDingle]] 17:00, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
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- | The introduction here is too talky. The reader will want to continue delving into API; as fun as waxing philosophic may be, I think it impedes the flow here.
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- | --[[User:Dmkoelle|Dmkoelle]] 03:18, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
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