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* p 35: The paragraph beginning "The definition and measurement of beauty" wanders off into philosophy a bit. I'd shorten this paragraph, perhaps keeping only the last two sentences.
 
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* p 35, para -2: "defined by the horizon" => "defined by their horizon"?
 
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* p 36, para 2: "steeply increased" => "greatly increased"
 
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* p 36, para -2: "This is problematic" => "This was problematic"
 
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* p 36, para -2: "most applications are fine" => "most applications were fine"
 
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* p 36, para -2: "certain pieces is gone" => "certain pieces were gone"
 
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* p 36, para -2: "developers are informed" => "developers were informed"
 
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* p 36, para -2: "they can no longer compile" => "they could no longer compile"
 
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* p 37, para 1: "on screen" => "on-screen"
 
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* p 37, para 2: "the API usage" => "the API's usage"
 
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* p 37, para 2: "the ultimate open source project" => "the ultimate open-source project"
 
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* p 38, para 2: "negatively effect" => "negatively affect"
 
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* p 39, para 2: "well intended" => "well-intended"
 
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--[[User:AdamDingle|AdamDingle]] 01:20, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
 
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* I agree with Adam that the discussion of beauty was much too long.
 
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* Page 35, para 1: "it has much a large chance" should be "it has a very large chance"
 
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Tomwheeler at 03:05, 28 March 2008 - 2008-03-28 03:05:41

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* I agree with Adam that the discussion of beauty was much too long.
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* Page 35, para 1: "it has much a large chance" should be "it has a very large chance"
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Thu Mar 27 21:58:13 CDT 2008

AdamDingle: New page: * p 35: The paragraph beginning "The definition and measurement of beauty" wanders off into philosophy a bit. I'd shorten this paragraph, perhaps keeping only the last two sentences. * p ... - 2008-03-28 01:20:52

New page: * p 35: The paragraph beginning "The definition and measurement of beauty" wanders off into philosophy a bit. I'd shorten this paragraph, perhaps keeping only the last two sentences. * p ...

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* p 35: The paragraph beginning "The definition and measurement of beauty" wanders off into philosophy a bit. I'd shorten this paragraph, perhaps keeping only the last two sentences.
* p 35, para -2: "defined by the horizon" => "defined by their horizon"?
* p 36, para 2: "steeply increased" => "greatly increased"
* p 36, para -2: "This is problematic" => "This was problematic"
* p 36, para -2: "most applications are fine" => "most applications were fine"
* p 36, para -2: "certain pieces is gone" => "certain pieces were gone"
* p 36, para -2: "developers are informed" => "developers were informed"
* p 36, para -2: "they can no longer compile" => "they could no longer compile"
* p 37, para 1: "on screen" => "on-screen"
* p 37, para 2: "the API usage" => "the API's usage"
* p 37, para 2: "the ultimate open source project" => "the ultimate open-source project"
* p 38, para 2: "negatively effect" => "negatively affect"
* p 39, para 2: "well intended" => "well-intended"

--[[User:AdamDingle|AdamDingle]] 01:20, 28 March 2008 (UTC)